南京阅卷中心的作文在1月28号左右已经全面结束，南京地区主要是负责上海，山东和海南三省市的作文批阅。总体看来，四级作文除海南之外大都在8分左右，即第三个档次的文章偏多。具体作文评分原则还是02年制定的那个，大家可以找找点点以前的帖子。

    阅卷过程中老师主要掌握这些原则，发现闪光点而不是找错误，有语言错误但是不影响意思表达时可以理解（但必须是在用英语思维的前提下，而不是老师利用汉语的思维回译的内容），不能只注重语言和单词，要更多注意语句表达出来没有，大家可以好好看看11分档次和8分档次的样卷，可能大家会觉得8分的样卷中有很多大家常用的词组，或者出现高级词汇的频率要多些，但是在阅卷中最主要看的是思想的表达，文字的连贯，把该说的说出来，不拖泥带水才是最主要的。下面是5篇样卷，大家可以参照着给自己的作文估算个分数。

14 points

Dear fellow students,

       I am grateful that you offer me the chance to speak here. I am impressed by the speeches of the previous candidates. Yet, I want to prove myself better for the post of chairman.

       First of all, I have a pleasant personality. Last year I was the dorm director of our building and I managed to get along with all the students well. I have acquired working experience and communication skills which I consider as the most essential for the coordinator of the whole student union.

       Secondly, I’m always ready to create. At present our union is very well organized. However our activity schedule is slightly motonous. I am willing to add some vivid elements into it in order to make our campus life more enjoyable.

       If I am elected the chairman, I promise I will become your voice and build the student union into a bridge between the students and the university.

       I’m your best choice, vote for me, vote for yourself, thank you!

干净，整洁，漂漂亮亮

11 points

       Hello, everyone. I believe I am the best choice of the post of chairman of the student union.

       First, I have the ability which is nessary to the post of chairman of the student union. I have been monitor of our class since I came to this school. In the past years, I worked very well on the post. Second, I have many interests. For example, I play basketball and foot ball very well. My tennis is good, too. Third, I have a lot of friends. Almost everyone likes me.

       If I were chosen to be the chairman of the student union, I will work for the need of the students. I will tell the school what we students really need and what we don’t want.

       I believe, I am the best choice for the post of chairman of student union. Thank you!

清清楚楚，该说的都说了，语法上没有什么大问题，篇章连贯，但感觉略缺火候。

8 points

Ladies and Gentlemen, all the schoolmates and teachers:

       I will elect to the post of chairman of the students union. The reasons I make this decision is that I’m desire to do more things for you. Apparently, only wishes are not available. I’ll make you believe that not only did I have wishes but also capacity.

       First, when I was a freshman, I took part in many kinds of activities to accumulate experiences and now I familiar with the process that how the students union works. Second, I love making friends and I had extensively hobbies. These can make me orgernize people easily. The tird, I take this work very seriously and I’ll try my best to improve and develop the students union to make you satisfired.

       In a word, I’m the right person you have ever been searching. So, support me! I’ll never make you disappointed.

马马虎虎，想表达某意思，但是有中国式的思维句，有明显汉语的影子。

5 points

       Thanks everybodies to give me a chance to electe the post of chairman of the student union. I’ll do my best in that post.

       I will inform myself first. I am a man of hard-working. So I will do anything with my best. I can help everyone who needs help. I have a weild-eyesight. Using computer is my farveate thing. Above all, is the reason why I elected the post.

       If I get the post, I’ll solve the problems of every students. First thing I think must solve is the price in the school. It is too expensive to our student. Second, I think we must have more free time. Nowaday, too many course in our table. So we cannot do something which we want to do. I think it is bad. Last, I wll orginaze more preformances in school, in order to fill the rest time.

       I hope everyone give me a chance to acheve my hopes. Thanks!

糊里糊涂

2 points

       Nowadays in our highly technological society, it’s wildly belived that the person’s ability is very crucial in our daily life.

       As for as I can do chairman of Student commitment for best. First at all I have good communication skill for any people. Secondly I have goodly boby to competent this assign, because I very like sport and every morning do body excises, mealwhile, I’m a great student to lead us student for study together, and of course. Last but not least. If I election successful, I will do my young age, do anything for every classmate rejoice in hoe and patient in tribulation.

       All of this reason to lead every people to conclution that I can election.

       Very hope all classmate support me. Thank you!