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高手进来帮我看看我的书信模板可有什么错误,谢了。

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togarcia 时间:2011-01-13 15:03  819次点击 | 0 关注

Dear Sir or Madam,

 

Thank you in advance for you attention to this letter and I'am writing to present my complaint/apology/request/invitation/application/introduction/gratitude/recommendation concerning sth that...

 

There are an array of factors contributing to this letter.

 

To begin with,...

In the second place,...

In addition...

I would be most grateful if you can reply me at earlist convenience and any favorable consideration will be great appreciated.

 

Yours Sincerely,

Li Ming

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  • cocacola [专业八级] ,2011-01-13

    我觉得没有问题,挺好的.

     

    There are an array of factors contributing to this letter 这句有点怪, 就直接说, there are several things we would like to discuss with you about in this letter.

     

    然后 1) 2) 3) 就好了,不要in the second, ...列一堆.

  • 孤独者 [初中英语] ,2011-03-13
    应该是“your attention"
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